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Writing/Design Help
The previous thread was getting pretty full so this is the new one.
This thread's purpose is to encourage more users
to take up battle writing whilst also encouraging current writers to continue creating fights in exchange for receiving helpful and constructive comments, listing ways in which they can improve their fights. To cut to the chase users can post fights that they've previously completed and then have to give a comment about what they thought of the previous user's battle/battles whilst also advising them on how they can improve their battles in the future.
Even if you don't wish to post any of your own fights, I recommend coming on here and following this thread if you want to read some of the battles created by the different authors on this site, especially if your a new user and want to see how other users write their fights.
Rules
You can only post up to two fights, per message, every three days. While it is acceptable to ask for a particular battle to be reviewed more than once, in order to prevent users from requesting the same battle to be reviewed several times, said battle can only be reviewed twice and the 2 reviews have to be at least 2 months apart from each other.
You must give a comment about the other user's battle before posting your own fights. However if you want to give a comment about another user's fight that you particularly liked in your message please do it underneath your comment about the previous user's fight.
Please only post a fight on here if it has been completed as otherwise it forces other users to wait until you’ve completed said fight to make a comment on it and post their own fight and may lead to other users ignoring your comment and posting their own fight if they get fed up with waiting for you to finish your battle which undermines the purpose of this thread.
Try and be respectful, even if you privately believe that the previous battle wasn’t that good.
Try and comment on specific details of the fight (along with other sections of the battle if you wish to) rather than just giving a vague 'your battle was great!' type of comment (Ex. 'I liked the part where Knuckles said 'Oh No!' when Bowser threw the rocks at him' OR 'I really enjoyed the fight as I thought it was really action packed, especially when Sora and Cloud exchanged blows at a rapid pace. Keep up the Great Work!')
Try your best to give a constructive comment on how the author can improve their fight alongside your other comments, even if you think that the fight is perfect. (Ex. 'While I really liked the fight, I do feel that there could have been more dialogue between Sora and Cloud and that Boomstick could have made more jokes in the analysis sections')
Even if you disagree with the outcome, don't comment on it or the research, the idea is for the authors to receive kind and helpful that will encourage them to improve their battle writing, not to make them feel bad about themselves. However, if a battle on here does happen to suffer from REALLY poor research or breaks any of the Rules and Guidelines, the author will be confronted about the issue by an Admin.
If you STRONGLY disagree with the comments that have been made about your fight, politely discuss the issue with the user about it on their wall rather confronting them about it on here. If the discussion gets out of control please report the issue on the Rule Violation Report.
Don't derail the thread.
Have Fun!
If you have any questions any of the rules on here, please let me know on my message wall.
Just Updated
- You must leave a rating/critique for the Thumbnail/Render above yours while also leaving a Thumbnail/Render for someone else to critique.
- The thumbnails and renders MUST be made by you,if it isn't made by you then we will kindly ask that you delete it.
- Only two pictures please, posting more than two will lead to entire walls of text and such so please only post two.
- Try to go into detail when you are giving criticism on a person's Thumbnails, simply giving responses like "The pictures don't match" or "It's good" would only make the game along with the thread boring.
- Please be respectful with your responses (This should be self-explanatory).
- As long as the Thumbnails/Renders are Vs Related then it is allowed, even if it is from another Vs Show (Like Crossover X, One Minute Melee, Cartoon Fight Club, ETC)
- Don't derail the thread.
- You must leave a rating/critique for the Thumbnail/Render above yours while also leaving a Thumbnail/Render for someone else to critique.
- The thumbnails and renders MUST be made by you,if it isn't made by you then we will kindly ask that you delete it.
- Only two pictures please, posting more than two will lead to entire walls of text and such so please only post two.
- Try to go into detail when you are giving criticism on a person's Thumbnails, simply giving responses like "The pictures don't match" or "It's good" would only make the game along with the thread borning.
- Please be respectful with your responses (This should be self-explanatory).
- As long as the Thumbnails/Renders are Vs Related then it is allowed, even if it is from another Vs Show (Like Crossover X, One Minute Melee, Cartoon Fight Club, ETC)
- Don't derail the thread.
</div></div><div class="lightbox-caption" style="width:300px;">Akira Howard (Astral Chain) vs. Byleth Eisner (Fire Emblem: Three Houses)</div></div><div class="wikia-gallery-item" style="width:302px; "><div class="thumb" style="height:171px;"><div class="gallery-image-wrapper accent" id="I_Keep_My_Ideals_Alive-png" style="position: relative; height:169px; width:300px;">
</div></div><div class="lightbox-caption" style="width:300px;">Shirou Emiya (Fate/Stay Night) vs. Izuku Midoriya (My Hero Academia)</div></div></div>- You must leave a rating/critique for the Thumbnail/Render above yours while also leaving a Thumbnail/Render for someone else to critique.
- The thumbnails and renders MUST be made by you,if it isn't made by you then we will kindly ask that you delete it.
- Only two pictures please, posting more than two will lead to entire walls of text and such so please only post two.
- Try to go into detail when you are giving critiscm on a person's Thumbnails, simply giving responses like "The pictures don't match" or "It's good" would only make the game along with the thread borning.
- Please be respectful with your responses (This should be self-explanitory).
- As long as the Thumbnails/Renders are Vs Related then it is allowed, even if it is from another Vs Show (Like Crossover X, One Minute Melee, Cartoon Fight Club, ETC)
- Don't derail the thread.
</div></div><div class="lightbox-caption" style="width:300px;">Medusa (Fate/Stay Night) vs. Scorpion (Mortal Kombat)</div></div><div class="wikia-gallery-item" style="width:302px; "><div class="thumb" style="height:171px;"><div class="gallery-image-wrapper accent" id="Oda_Nobunaga_Battle_Royale-png" style="position: relative; height:169px; width:300px;">
</div></div><div class="lightbox-caption" style="width:300px;">Oda Nobunaga (Nioh) vs. Oda Nobunaga (Fate/KOHA-ACE) vs. Oda Nobunaga (Sengoku Basara) vs. Oda Nobunaga (Nobunaga the Fool).png</div></div></div>- You can request up to 2 Fight Renders every 3 days (I might change this amount depending on how popular this thread is).
- Please specify what type of background you want in your Render unless you don’t mind what background is used in creating said Render.
- If the type of background your requesting is particularly specific (ex. In Shao Kahn’s throne-room) we’d recommend that you provide a copy of said template yourself so that the other users who use this thread can make your Render more easily.
- If you don’t mind what background is used to create your Renders then just don’t specify any particular background when requesting a Fight Render to be made or say that you don’t mind what template is used to create your Renders.
- Be patient - depending on how complicated your request is it might take a while for other users to create said Renders so don’t get annoyed if you have to wait a few days for your Render.
- If you feel that the Fight Render you’ve recieved isn’t that good you can politely request another one but try not to get too fussy about it.
- Regular Thumbnails, Intro, Combatants Set and Results Templates are NOT to be requested on here.
- While this thread is designed to support users with making Fight Render, please try to not solely rely on it to provide said Renders for you unless you completely unable to make them yourself.
- Don’t derail the thread.
- You can request up to 3 TN’s every 3 days (I might change this amount depending on how popular this thread is)
- Feel free to request any Thumbnail that is Screwattack related, this includes One Minute Melee, DBX TN’s, Intro, Combatants Set and Winner templates.
- Please specify what type of Death Battle or Intro/Combatants Set/Winner TN you want (ex. A gold season 2 template or a Season 4 Combatants Set template) to find a list of all the different templates check out AgentHoxton’s Thumbnail Template Blog and Bloxxer’s Thumbnail Making Tutorial.
- If the type of template your requesting is particularly specific (ex. A green Season 3 template) we’d recommend that you provide a copy of said template yourself so that the other users who use this thread can make your TN more easily.
- If you don’t mind what template is used to create your TNs then just don’t specify any particular TN templates when requesting a TN to be made or say that you don’t mind what template is used to create your TNs.
- Be patient - depending on how complicated your request is it might take a while for other users to create said TN’s so don’t get annoyed if you have to wait a few days for your TN.
- If you feel that the TN you’ve recieved isn’t that good you can politely request another one but try not to get too fussy about it.
- Fight Renders are NOT to be requested on here.
- While this thread is designed to support users with making TN’s please try to not solely rely on it to provide said TN’s for you.
- Don’t derail the thread.
- You may only give two songs per suggestions
- Please give an idea of the type of music that you are looking for, it'll help people suggest music with more ease
- You must suggest songs to the person who commented above while also asking for suggestions
- No inappropriate music (Pretty Self-Explanatory)
- Please be respectful to users on the thread, we're all using it for similiar reasons. There is no need for any hostility, disrespect, or rudeness.
- Do not derail the thread
- You can only post up to two fights, per message, every three days.
- While it is acceptable to ask for a particular battle to be reviewed more than once, in order to prevent users from requesting the same battle to be reviewed several times, said battle can only be reviewed twice and the 2 reviews have to be at least 2 months apart from each other.
- You must give a comment about the other user's battle before posting your own fights.
- However if you want to give a comment about another user's fight that you particularly liked in your message please do it underneath your comment about the previous user's fight.
- Please only post a fight on here if it has been completed as otherwise it forces other users to wait until you’ve completed said fight to make a comment on it and post their own fight and may lead to other users ignoring your comment and posting their own fight if they get fed up with waiting for you to finish your battle which undermines the purpose of this thread.
- Try and be respectful, even if you don't think that the battle was that good or disagree with the outcome.
- Try and comment on specific details of the fight (along with other sections of the battle if you wish to) rather than just giving a vague 'your battle was great!' type of comment (Ex. 'I liked the part where Knuckles said 'Oh No!' when Bowser threw the rocks at him' OR 'I really enjoyed the fight as I thought it was really action packed, especially when Sora and Cloud exchanged blows at a rapid pace. Keep up the Great Work!')
- Try your best to give a constructive comment on how the author can improve their fight alongside your other comments, even if you think that the fight is perfect. (Ex. 'While I really liked the fight, I do feel that there could have been more dialogue between Sora and Cloud and that Boomstick could have made more jokes in the analysis sections')
- Even if you disagree with the outcome, don't comment on it or the research, the idea is for the authors to receive kind and helpful that will encourage them to improve their battle writing, not to make them feel bad about themselves. However, if a battle on here does happen to suffer from REALLY poor research or breaks any of the Rules and Guidelines, the author will be confronted about the issue by an Admin.
- If you STRONGLY disagree with the comments that have been made about your fight, politely discuss the issue with the user about it on their wall rather confronting them about it on here. If the discussion gets out of control please report the issue on the Rule Violation Report.
- Don't derail the thread.
- Have Fun!
- You must leave a rating/critique for the Thumbnail/Render above yours while also leaving a Thumbnail/Render for someone else to critique.
- The thumbnails and renders MUST be made by you,if it isn't made by you then we will kindly ask that you delete it.
- Only two pictures please, posting more than two will lead to entire walls of text and such so please only post two.
- Try to go into detail when you are giving critiscm on a person's Thumbnails, simply giving responses like "The pictures don't match" or "It's good" would only make the game along with the thread borning.
- Please be respectful with your responses (This should be self-explanitory).
- As long as the Thumbnails/Renders are Vs Related then it is allowed, even if it is from another Vs Show (Like Crossover X, One Minute Melee, Cartoon Fight Club, ETC)
- Don't derail the thread.
</div></div><div class="lightbox-caption" style="width:300px;">Captain Marvelous (Kaizoku Sentai Gokaiger) vs. Akira Kurusu (Persona 5)</div></div><div class="wikia-gallery-item" style="width:302px; "><div class="thumb" style="height:171px;"><div class="gallery-image-wrapper accent" id="Ice_Queen_VS_One-Winged_Angel-png" style="position: relative; height:169px; width:300px;">
</div></div><div class="lightbox-caption" style="width:300px;">Esdeath (Akame Ga Kill!) vs. Sephiroth (Final Fantasy VII)</div></div></div>