Crap! I meant to put the light particles Behind Luz.

Now it looks weird :(

No the light effect infront of her looks better keep it that way

MU is pretty alr but the TN is solid, good effects and good quality, an overall 8-9.1/10 pretty goober

I like the TN! Don't know enough about both to say anything on the MU but the TN is well made!

These two have a surpising ammont of connections.

Both began their series by enacting a selfish decision involving their mothers, that would end up completely changing the course of an entire country's fate, unaware of the impact this would cause. (Edward attempting to resurrect his mother, which led to him becoming an Alchemist, and Luz running away from home, stumbling into the Boiling Isles.)

• On the surface, both are known for being stubborn, unruly, and strong-willed, but to those they care for, they have an unyielding loyalty, and unwavering compassion for those they want to protect. Deep down however, they hold a deep guilt complex, blaming themselves for an event that drastically warped their perception of life. (Edward blaming himself for Alphonse losing his body, becoming much more aware of morality, and Luz blaming herself for Belos's rise to power, thinking it was all her fault.) Over time, both's beliefs on this would begin to dissipate, due to the assistance of the family they learned to open up to.)

• As a young child, both had lost one of their parents due to a mysterious illness, greatly affecting them, even years after they had lost them. (Edward losing his mother, Trisha, and Luz losing her father, Manny.)

• Both became deeply interested in their world's magic system, becoming prodigies after learning how to harness their power, but contrast in that while Luz has to utilize her powers by drawing glyphs in a world where no one else needs to, Edward is able to use his powers without a glyph circle in a world where everyone else has to.

• Both became the students of incredibly powerful, intimidating masters, who attempt to run from their past and instead live simpler lives as shop keepers, but were able to face their past trauma with the assistance of the protagonists, who they view as their own child. (Eda Clawthorne and Izumi Curtis.) Both would also be able to spend a lot of bonding time with their brother during this time, who they hold most dear to them. (Alphonse and King.)

• After meeting these masters, both began how to learn to use their powers from a government facility, officially becoming a part of them. (Edward becoming a State Alchemist, and Luz becoming a student of Hexside, which is overseen by the Emperor's Coven.) During their times here, both would meet a multitude of similar friends and companions. These include the bosses of their establishment who they would butt heads with, but would ultimately work together to protect their colleagues. (Roy Mustang and Principal Bump.) The meek, but very intelligent girl who helped them in times of need. (Willow Parker and Sheska.) The emotional, yet very kind man who served as comedic relief of sorts, but had their serious moments. (Alex Armstrong and Gus Porter.) Both of them also knew a girl who was antagonistic to them for a time, who eventually fell in love with them. (Winry Rockbell and Amity Blight.)

• Both them and their entire crew of allies and friends would team up to uncover a much darker plot, hidden by the government of the world, discovering that the leader behind the plot had planned to sacrifice many lives by utilizing an eclipse, who had also been sending inhuman warriors who they cloned after the protagonists to eliminate them. (Father wanting to gain power from The Promised Day by sacrificing the lives of Amestris, and Emperor Belos wanting to eliminate all witches on the Day of Unity.)

• Both were at the lowest points in their lives after believing their beloved brother to be dead, completely distraught. (King sending Luz to safety, and Alphonse becoming a Philosophers Stone.)

• Both had made allies with one of the cloned underlings of the main villain, who had betrayed them after the heroes had caused them to question their life and their purpose in it. (Greed and Hunter.)

• Both served as the "glue" of the series, not being nearly powerful enough to accomplish fighting the villains on their own, but by being there, they managed to bring everyone together, who would have never joined forces otherwise, managing to defeat the antagonist in a desperate final battle, with the protagonists being given aid by the strongest character in their world. (Truth dragging Father away, and King's dad giving his power to Luz.) Even then, this wouldn't have been possible without everyone working together.

• After their defeat, the protagonists ended up losing the ability to access their powers, being saddened by it, but accepting it, happy that their friends and family were safe. However, Luz would ultimately gain it back years later, while Edward would be stuck without it.

• The final shot of both are the protagonists grown up after a several year time skip, smiling as they are surrounded by their friends, family, and loved ones.

( I ripped this from reddit)

Bro pulled out the elder scroll

Well made TN for a not really sensical MU. What exactly can they offer each other that their better options (Anne for Luz and whoever for Ed) don't already offer?

^ That's the fun part, I like taking MUs like this and trying to make sense of them, especially for their surprising amount of connections.

Besides Anne vs Luz is too easy for me and can be done by someone much more skilled in writing, or DB themselves for that matter