Talk:Mii Fighter Battle Royale/@comment-96.231.157.146-20150305193103

I like your battles, but I just think you could do much better when it comes to WRITING them. Here's a cleaner version of the last part.

"As she was flying torwards the stage, Mii Gunner notcied something: A Smash Ball! Excitedly, she quickly smashed it. As the signature glow appeared on her body, she charged up her arm cannon...

And fired a huge beam worthy of Samus herself. Of course, the Brawler was long gone when she fired the beam, but as for the Swordfighter...

The swordfighter, coughing up blood, looked up, and saw the beam. It was the last thing he'd ever see. As he got enveloped by the beam, he let out one last, blood-curling scream...

When the beam had dispersed, all that was left of the once-mighty Swordfighter was his sword. Showing every sign of pleasure, she picked up the sword and put it in her backpack. As she stood up to leave, she felt a tap on her back.

Before the Gunner could so much as turn, she got kicked high into the sky. The Brawler scoffed, jumping into the air. His Omega Blitz was in effect. After several punches and kicks, the Gunner realized resistance was futile. She stopped resisting, accepting her fate.

Finally, the Brawler kicked the gunner back to the ground, creating both a crater and making dust swirl up in the air. The Brawler came down. When the dust cleared, the Brawler saw the following;

A crater, and the Gunner, on her back. As he stared into the the Gunner's lifeless eyes, he felt a sense of acomplishment. The Brawler turned torwards the viewer, and smiled.

KO!