Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-27150398-20190209214323

Gex VS Bug

First of all, the Description and Interlude sections look fine and do a great job at explaining the connections of the two characters.

Both you and Toni’s analysis sections were pretty detailed and the some of the host dialogue was quite funny.

As for the fight itself, I think it was really well done. The choreography of the fight was great, along with the dialogue. I also liked the fact the Gex and Bug fought each other in different locations and additionally found the Ninja and Revenge of the Sith references to be very funny.

The results section was quite detailed and you used a number of specific examples of each character’s feats to justify why Gex won the battle, which was good to see.

The spelling, grammar and overall formatting of the page was pretty much on point. However, in terms of criticism, while you did use a lot of commas to separate the different sections of your long sentences in the fight section, the fact that some of your paragraphs were around 6 or 7 lines long and didn’t have any full stops, did make the battle a bit more difficult to read, so I’d recommend that you try and add more full stops in the battle sections of your future fights.

Overall, I’d give the battle a 9/10.

My version of Aquaman vs. Namor the Sub-Mariner.