Thread:Joshbry23/@comment-30408599-20181028232618/@comment-30408599-20191231041114

I thought it was pretty good, & thoroughly enjoyed it. I did have to make a small tweak, since your portrayal of the fight was different than mine, I had to add a bit of context so people didn't get confused. My fight had them on a small planetoid after the Doomship was destroyed, so the parts where they fall off wouldn't make sense unless the viewer knows that they're actually standing on the Doomship, & in the sky.

That's all though, it's still looking real good.