Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-33952388-20181218043532

Ok, the very first thing I noticed is that both of Necro and Mercer's dialogue was in bold. I would've preferred one of the two's dialogue was normal, and big chunks of bold followed by small lines of bold looks strange.

A few Grammar mistakes here and there, especially with capitalisation, mostly in Bendy's name, and some things were capitalised that shouldn't be, "Beast Bendy Realized his blunder." is the example that jumped to my mind.

The battle was good, action-packed and not one-sided, which as I stated in an earlier comment, I really like. The battle was also in bold, which as I stated earlier, didn't make any sense.

One thing, Death Battles tend to be set in locations that doesn't tend to side to one fighter. Having the battle set in the ink factory didn't make any sense, as that gave Bendy a big advantage, especially since the Ink Machines are there. Having the battle set in a random location means the fighters only have access to their regular equipment. If Batman V Spider-Man was set in the Batcave, the fight would've been much different.

The ending to the fight was quite abrupt. It's like Mario fighting Bowser and as he goes to press the button to destroy the bridge, the screen blacks out and then we see Mario and Peach walk off into the sunset. We don't know that Bowser was defeated, we just see Mario and Peach walk off.

Another thing, the conclusion was in italics. I'm not sure why this is, but it's out of place. Necro and Mercer's names had an apostrophe before it in the conclusion and not at the beginning, again, this is out of place.

Overall, a good fight, good analyses and conclusion, some issues ultimately held back an otherwise good page.

6.5/10

Now, for the first battle I'd ever created: Mii Brawler Vs. Ryu