Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20181202053837

Well right off the bat, the formatting for Wiz & Boomstick's dialogue is inconsistent. It's only at the beginning, so it's not that bad, but it's an easy fix so I'd suggest doing so. There're also some grammar errors, but honestly most fights I read have notable grammar errors, so nothing particularly out of place, just something to be improved upon.

Batman's analysis seems to be good (I can't verify cause I'm not a DC guy), but it's just shy of 350 words (342). Black Panther's analysis seems just as good as Batman's, & it meets the word count goal (424). Besides all that, both analyses end with "don't mess with [character]", which isn't very creative, but it's not a big deal.

On to the fight. The reason for the fight starting is alright. The fight seems interesting, but the grammar errors take away much of the impact for me. I also think some music during the fight would've been a really good addition. My favorite part is this right here:

Terry:"I am surprised that you can still stand after that.Most would stay down."

T'challa:"I am not most."

Based on what little I know, these words just seem really accurate, & give the sense that this is no average fight. I'm a little confused on why Bruce was helping Terry, it wasn't explained in the analysis or the fight. I also don't know what Terry's last line is supposed to mean, but maybe that's just me. Overall, a good fight.

5/10

Magolor VS Rosalina