Talk:Sans Vs Hank J. Wimbleton/@comment-5035900-20180814110439

It was certainly interesting learning about both characters, the latter of whom I had no idea existed prior to this read. The battle itself proved hecktic and tense, and while I'm not very knowledgable on either combatant, the outcome seemed reasonable and agreeable.

If there are some things that could use some tidying up, it could be working on some repetitive descriptions of attacks and actions (which, in fairness, I've done lots of in the past) and some grammar and word choice (I think you meant to say Hank pulled the pin on the grenade towards the end). But all of it is definitely workable.

Keep up the writing, Zuskato.