Talk:Groudon VS Dark Gaia/@comment-30408599-20180808183610

Good fight, and I agree with the outcome. I was pleasantly surprised to find another completed Dark Gaia fight on this wiki, and even more so to find that he won.

There are a few things you could do to improve this battle though.

1. The thumbnail doesn't have the opponents lined up with each other, and the "Death Battle" is obscuring their faces.

2. You mentioned Groudon's moves, but you didn't explain all of them. This is especially apparent with Mud Shot, a move he uses often, but is never described. I had this problem in one of my Death Battles, and someone made sure to point it out to me, so I wanted to pass it on.

3. I'd suggest explaining more why Fissure wouldn't work on Dark Gaia. If it were me, I'd say "Fissure's accuracy is reliant on Level, something that only applies to games. Looking at the anime, manga, and move description (I only looked briefly so this part is relative), we see that Fissure is a OHKO because it drops the opponent into the fissure. Dark Gaia's too big to fall into a fissure, so it wouldn't work on him". But that's just me, you don't have to change it.