Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-26036704-20190121115310

Posting this long fight again cause it seems like most people don't like it. Wanted to see if this'd give me some insight as to why.

Brendan and Sceptile VS Takato and Guilmon Sorry for tl:DRing this but the wiki ate my previous comment.

the drama and story needs fleshing out as some parts make no sense,

mega brandon sceptile was cheesy and a bit jarring, some parts of the fight are poorly worded and confusing, and please with the part where mega brandon sceptile appears put paragraphs the wall if text makes it hard to get through.

The research seemed to make sense with the results and the fight despite being rushed and confusing was a good fight.

I’d rate 7/10

https://deathbattlefanon.wikia.com/wiki/Noctis_Vs_Dante

could some one read this and give me critism? This is my longest fight to date and I want to improve upon it when a write yet another long fight.