Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-26153757-20181121041152

Vrokorta wrote: Well, right off the bat, multiple grammar errors. I'd personally suggest tidying up the fight sometime.

Omega's analysis is very short in comparison to Vile's, a nearly 3X difference in word count. I'm going to assume this is just because Vile has more lore or weapons, but there's still a problem. It actually breaks the rules of the wiki. Omega's analysis needs to be at least 350 words, but yours is only 291 words. You should fix that as soon as you can. Towards the end of both Vile & Omega's analyses, you list some of their best feats, but you don't say where they came from. That's something you should specify in your battles so readers know where you're coming from in your research. It also makes it look like your'e making assumptions instead of backing up your claims.

On to the fight, I don't think Omega's personality is quite accurate here. From what I know, he's more aggressive & bloodlusted than protective, & that doesn't show through here. He also seems to talk a lot, & his personality just isn't accurate, I always find Death Battles more interesting when the characters act as they should (I know it can't always be 100% accurate, but I think at least 50% accuracy should try to be acheived). As for the fight itself, I said this, Pyro said this, and I'm gonna say it again, the fight is clearly one-sided based on the writing alone. Omega never lands a single decent hit for the whole fight, & everything just seems to be twisted in Vile's favor. Example being when Omega is sent flying into a car, while Vile is sent flying right next to his armor. I know you're probably just making it accurate to the research done (I did the same thing in Landia V.S. Smaug before changing it based on feedback), but sometimes it's good to ignore the research during the fight just to make things more interesting, I do it all the time. On top of all that, the music just doesn't really fit in my opinion. Some good ol' fashion action music would've done better I think. Also, need I mention the mess of polls at the bottom of the page? I'd suggest fixing that. And since these posts are for battle quality, & not whether you agree or not, I'm gonna stop here.

In conclusion, I think the style of fight you were going for just wasn't my style. I wouldn't say it's bad, but I woudn't say it's good either (<this is probably the most offensive thing I've said on this whole thread)

Dark Gaia vs Godzilla

Somehow, I didn't post, MY FIRST DEATH BATTLE. Bruh, while I do agree with every single one of your criticisms about this guy's battle, you could have found at least just ONE positive thing to say about it.