Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-7424710-20191229010248

The fight has typos and other small grammatical errors (sometimes people talk but don't have quotation marks). Sometimes people curse a bit much, but that's just personal preference.

The bios were fine, but it would've been convenient if you had cited the sources on certain instances of powerscaling (ex. SC being MFTL) so it can coherently make sense. Your argument for how DIO and Diavolo's simultaneous time paradox works is a bit convoluted and doesn't make sense, trying to theorize that they actually use pocket dimensions or something. Fun for a theory on its own, but it's not actually a confirmed factoid from Araki, so I don't see it as a necessary inclusion.

Overall it's still fine and stands out with proficient writing, the only thing I would improve on is keeping track of grammatical errors.

7/10 for me

My fight is Guts VS Dimitri