User blog comment:ShyGuytheBro/ERB 1 Yang vs Little Mac/@comment-24780629-20160614232330

Pretty, good, but there are a few things I must critque.

First of all, the amo8unt of references to outside characters and even songs was a tad too much.

Second of all, I noticed you started to use the same disses again, ie. "Like a broken up team, and a mother that doesn't even miss you." when you used that same diss, albeit split into to lines, in his first verse.

Thirdly, the disses started getting stale by the last verses.

My advice: Try to reference other things as well as have the rappers reference each other, if that makes sense.