Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20181228223453

Kamehameha300 - Thanks for the feedback, I didn't realize that I forgot to include their history (I've fixed that now).

I'll review your fight now, but I'm probably going to go into great detail with my opinion, so just remember it's my opinion.

Starting off, there's no thumbnail or pictures to show off the combatants. If a reader doesn't know about the combatants (like me), then they're gonna have trouble visualizing... pretty much everything.

Also, your "Description" is a bit lackluster, showing little enthusiasm or excitement.

In your "Interlude", the link to the Invader theme just links to Youtube instead of the video.

Sakura's analysis doesn't go over much in terms of feats & abilities, but I imagine that's just cause she doesn't have much to go over.

Both of the music links in Takeda's analysis are broken, you'll want to fix that. I also noticed that Takeda's analysis has the same flaw as Sakura's. Most of both analyses are taken up by history, while the rest is taken up by flaws & arsenal. You miss out on things like feats that decide strength & speed, which is an important part of every analysis. However, if you can't find feats, that's fine, just be sure to say that in the analysis.

You told me how history is important, so I'll breifly bring up how stats are important too. When someone reads your analysis, you want them to start comparing stats, & wonder who would win. If all you give are abilities & weaknesses, there's nothing for readers to go off of for their bets, & it just becomes a matter of seeing who the writer decided to have win. It's important to cover these things so people get a good understanding of why a certain character won.

The reason for the fight starting was good & seamless, just the way I like it. Some fights have a pre-fight that feels tacked on, but this one was well made. However, your music cue is broken again, so I had to find some combat music for this fight. The fight itself was good, a few nitpicks here & there, but it was good, & didn't feel too basic or overdone.

The results were good, & made sense based on the analyses given. However, the problem of the fight lacking in feats & stats affects the results as well. Due to this, the whole fight ends up being an argument of who's more experience, skill, & arsenal. No mention of strength, speed, etc.

Overall though, this fight is good, even though I'm not familiar with either character or series. Also, my personal props to you for mitigating grammar errors.

7/10

Posting this again for better feedback. Feel free to review the original fight, or the rematch: Weedle vs Kunemon