Thread:Deathbattlewatcher5/@comment-37644871-20191203174948/@comment-37453138-20191203212725

Well I've read it

Bravo on the fight, and well done if the work on Hiei's speed was your own doing

Maybe just check to make sure the words and spelling are correct in the sections, and maybe the backstory part of their bios could have been lengthier

Overall, it was well done and worthy of being the first of a reboot series