Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20190424231301

Hey, look who's back. It's me. Anyways, I kinda hyped myself up to review Electrode vs Chuck, so I'll be reviewing that, AND Mugman vs Papyrus.

Electrode Vs Chuck

Electrode's analysis was great, with a good explanation of his moves, stats, scaling, & weaknesses. My only suggestion would be to sum up his moveset to save time, but that's just me, someone who's researched a lot of Pokemon & needed a way to speed things up.

Chuck's analysis was also pretty good, though I can't judge the accuracy all too well since I've yet to research Angry Birds myself.

The fight itself was great, with a fun display of personality in both combatants, as well as a good use of both their arsenals. There were times when I kind of lost track of what was happening during the fight, but I'm not sure why.

The results were pretty good. However, there were things in the results that weren't in the analyses, which tends to be an issue (trust me, I've made the same mistake). I also didn't like the use of Pokemon type advantages to choose the victor, it seemed inconsistent & like you were cherry-picking advantages.

Overall, great fight, great analyses, & I agree. It's clear that you put a lot of work into this, & fights like these make me want to read more fights. There were just some things that didn't fit my tastes. But, for the record, I found no grammar errors, & that's ALWAYS a plus for me.

9/10

Mugman vs Papyrus

Mugman's analysis is alright, though it might benefit from more specific info. For example, we don't get any image of how big the wall Mugman breaks is, we just have to take your word for it.

Papyrus' analysis is pretty average, it explains his abilities, feats, & weaknesses, but nothing to really set it apart.

The fight itself is surprisingly good in comparison to the analyses. However, I find it odd that Mugman just so happens to accidentally not dodge Papyrus' blue bones, thus somehow coming to the conclusion that they only hurt moving targets. It ends up feeling to me like you're just playing things into Mugman's favor, whether you are or not. On the other hand, the finisher was pretty good.

Not sure if I agree, but the results were pretty alright too.

Overall, pretty average battle (no offence), not really how I'd do it, so it's hard for me to judge, but do consider some of my feedback.

6/10

One of my most recent fights George vs Congar