Thread:Big the cat 10/@comment-31225410-20160327230245

I've looked at the wiki for months, but only just created an account. I'm wondering, could use some grammar to make your fights a bit cleaner? No offense, but I think your battles look a little rough. Here is an example from Darth Maul vs Spiderman.

Original: "The Clone wars was raging through the Galaxy and Maul clashed with Kenobi on multiple occasions his exploits eventually caught the attention of Sidious who saw Maul as a threat killed Opress and locked Maul up"

Modified: "The Clone Wars was raging through the galaxy and Maul clashed with Kenobi on multiple occasions. His exploits eventually caught the attention of Sidous who saw Maul as a threat, killed Opress, and locked Maul up. "

It's a few minor grammar improvements, with things like adding periods, commas, and capital letters. I won't do it if you don't want to Big. I liked when you and Shrek made separate battles on your collabs. You've done a good job with your fights Big, and I hope you can keep it up! 