Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20181004204421

Infinite VS Necrozma - There are a lot of grammar errors throughout the fight, but they didn't really take away from the fight much. The analysis portion wasn't very well structured. For future reference, try to break the research up in to specific parts. For example, talk about history & background first, then talk about abilities, then talk about equipment, then talk about feats, then talk about faults. It'll make your analyses more organized & easier to read. For your fight, I'm gonna tell you what Blade0886 told me, it gets confusing what characters are doing when you refer to their attack by name all the time without describing it. That's what happened with Necrozma in this fight, you say what moves he uses, but readers don't actually know what he's doing. The music isn't very well timed, & don't last very long. The fight itself was pretty good, albeit not the best choreographed. The fight could certainly use some work, but it's good.

Lucario vs Knuckles - The research doesn't go over much, it needs to be more descriptive. I'd suggest adding Headings to keep your fight organized. You also don't transition your words very well. This is especially apparent when the fight starts, & Lucario's text transitions right into Knuckle's, & you don't know who's talking. You can either put the character's name next to the text, or make the text more descriptive so you know who's talking. The grammar could use some work, as could the fight. The fight is okay, but there are too many "no way he could survive that" moments. The results could explain more, but it's good enough. Not as good as the first one, I personally would suggest fixing it up a bit.

Hope I wasn't too harsh or anything.

Tl;dr: Both fights could use work, hope I wasn't too harsh.

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