Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-38210990-20191115100915

Seeing this thread is kinda ded, I'll guess I'll make this

Gon VS Yusuke;

All right, though a quick skim though it looks all right but obviously medium-ish amount of text doesn't mean the fight itself is bad. My first problem is why is the "Intro" sign so small? Next IDK why you capitalize your "i"s and start of the another sentence for the hosts. Also on Boomstick's thrid line there is a grammar mistake; he's instead of "hes" and I'm instead of "im". The bios for both character look pretty good and really imfomative, nothing to much to say here (except [In the personal interest] why you have no links to the music). I can see that you tried to make the fight action-packed and fun which you exceeded yet it's kinda short. The verdict seems correct and gave nice reasoning (another personal problem is that why is the "winner card" not in the middle? [I have OCD lol]).

Personally 7/10

Yang VS Leone; Nice Thumbnail, sees that you fixed you capitalization problem yet not your "missing apostrophe" problem. For some reason the fight looks werid cut up into bits but the bios again are still infomative and kinda funny. The fight again looks short but surprisingly was still fun to read and has some nice collagraphy to it. Nothing much to say too the verdict except personally I think the final calcuation was a bit too long. Giving it a 6.5/10

Anyways my fight:

(Made this under 24-hours lololol)

https://deathbattlefanon.fandom.com/wiki/The_Dog_VS_Springtrap