Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-34942931-20180402153731

To TJ and your battles.

Honestly every time I read a Pokémon death battle a little part of me (my childhood) dies inside. It's like one of the territories I'm probably never going to touch all things considered. I just can't handle it. Either way, the fight was a bit copy paste for my liking? I understand you can't do too much with an analysis ehen they're all mostly the same, but reading off their stats and otherwise just seemed weird? Like you could say they have the highest defense or something, but reading the actual numbers feels weird to me. The fight was also a lot of X used Y kinda thing. A bit tedious to read, but it helps with figuring out what's happening I suppose, yeah. I just feel like you could describe the attacks a bit more. Instead of just saying Cobalion Iron head, you could just make Cobalion spike his head down onto the opponent. There's a lot of descriptive language that could be useful. Though I do agree with the results of the final winner, I feel that Keldeo would be third and not fourth, just because of the sheer disadvantage Terrakion holds.

Dee Jay and Lucio. Having done a fight with lucio myself, I agree with the results. The analysis didn't feel copy and paste this time because they are two different characters and not incredibky similar. Because of this I give that a thumbs up. The fight felt better as well, though it was hard to give an exact mental image of the scene? I dunno. I feel like more could have been done with that, but it wasn't a requirement. Good job either way. It's pretty good.

So, like, I'm really happy with how this went, so I wanna know what others think about it? If anyone cares to read it that'd be great. I had fun writing it so either way I'm happy, but I want people to read it and give me criticism.

http://deathbattlefanon.wikia.com/wiki/Freddy_Fazbear_vs._Jeff_the_Killer