Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-5035900-20191209002722

I haven't done of these in a while, so I may be a bit behind on reviewing in general, but in an effort to get this thread going again, I will review the last battle posted here, Wendigo vs Werewolf.

Both character sections were fairly informative in regards to their abilities, but part of me wanted more of their histories. Also, the Werewolf's section was somewhat shorter than the Wendigo's, which isn't an issue, but just something I noticed.

The battle, while having its moments, went by rather quickly and felt quite one-sided with the losing combatant spending most of its time getting hit while hardly landing any of its own. Now I could understand that being an accurate showcase of how such a battle would go, but I feel it is much more gratifying for the losing combatant to not only get more hits in, but to appear to hold their ground, if not appear dead-even until the victor goes all-out, effectively giving the satisfaction of having pushed them into giving 100%. Perhaps it is more a personal preference or a matter of taste, but just something I wanted to point out.

That all said, the conclusion was solid, showcasing the differences in speed, strength, and regeneration, and how the victor ultimately had an ace that bypassed their opponent's regeneration.

I'm sure I'm supposed to leave a number out of 10, but I'm admittedly terrible at that sort of thing. Instead, I would conlude by saying that there is room for improvement, both in regards to adding some additional length and patching up some grammatical errors. It was something quite different for me, as I don't generally read battles based on mythilogical beasts, and I can understand the challenge in basically trying to composite several different takes on the two beasts in question. So overall, a good effort and I'd happily read a second version of it.

For the next battle, something a little different in the form of an OC vs OC collaboration between myself and Komodo25M: Zax vs Pan.