Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-3463132-20180211161232

For starts, Batter's abilties/competences are listed out in clean and clear detail- something not a lot of fights manage to pull off. Also you included a gif of Batter that seems to be rotoscoping and by golly I will happily cheer at every example of my favorite animation-style I come across. Gifs in general should be used more than they seem to be in fights- though I'll note the frequency has risen. Too often a fight will just be a wall of text and that's just visually not appealing.

That said, yellow font, no. Yellow on white is bad and will always be so. I don't care how thematically approproiate it may be- that's painful to read. Also, remember to proof-read.

I've never been that fond of one character basically solo-ing a bunch of stuff before a battle starts but Batter definitely was getting the job done before the battle even started and builds himself up as a guy that's hard to stop. So from a character developing pov kudos.

Sans' section is pretty bare-bones compared to Batter. Listing a few calcs would not have been remiss even though you did post them later in the results. Batter's section took me two minutes to read, Sans' took 12 seconds. Now granted, it's Sans and Undertale so I can certainly understand why you don't have much information to work with. But in cases like that I would shorten up the opposing profile a bit so it doesn't seem like I put a lot more work into one side than the other.

"To cut to the chase users can post fights that they've previously completed"

Bummer, that means ours doesn't it? I kinda think my latest battles have been pretty lackluster. And we have to do two? ...Aight.

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