Thread:Arigarmy/@comment-32220816-20170715061106/@comment-7424710-20170715063746

I'm not really a critic, but there are some tropes about OCs I dislike.

I can tell this is meant to be one of those self-insert things, no offense, and people usually apply themselves with cosmic abilities or really strong powers. And then they get the "one of a kind" plot where they're one of a special kind, and are above the rest. Same goes for the whole "really one of another race who was sent to Earth" kind of ordeals since it's been done so much to death.

I also dislike the usage to make him so good that his personality isn't a trope, which is a trope within itself. Some parts of it I like (like not being stupid), some (angry eye glow wow so angery) push me farther toward the edge. Some traits like "perfect marksman" pushes away from that so-called defining trait.

Though I like what you've done with the weaknesses of the character to not be a spam God or something, which is nice. I wouldn't change anything I dislike unless you want to do it yourself, because it is your creation and all that stuff.