Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20180706225337

Ignoring the fact that I disagree with your explanation for the conclusion, the battle was good.

Research could've been better, and there were times when I thought you used too much dialogue or your fight didn't flow well. Also, the way you portrayed Bomberman during the fight almost made it seem like you were a little biased toward him. Not saying you are, but usually when a character is dominating the opponent and dodging almost every attack, I feel like the writer is siding with that character a bit too much. It could just be I feel this way cause I was betting on Mario, but you usually want to balance the butts being kicked so it doesn't seem one sided.

It was otherwise a good fight.

Landia V.S. Smaug