Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-7424710-20190101055839

lol im back and just to advertise i'll play your game rules

Before I begin, your review doesn't really impact any writing advice, it just seems like you only want your fights reviewed while not having to work for the first half of it.

First of all, the first fight page is a mess because you have no idea how to make tabbers apparently. It's too cluttered to navigate. The bios themselves are really too little to justify both two characters. It's barebones and gets the job done, but it could be better.

Mickey is way OOC. Like damn, the dude needs anger management classes. At least Bugs' snarkiness is this thing, Mickey's got some roid rage. I can't say I agree or disagree because a lot of things for both parties of each time aren't included, so I don't really have anything to say.

Typos here and there, but it ain't terrible, I'd give it a 6.

Gum man vs Mickey again is also a similar story. Barebones for Gumball, but gets the job done. Mickey has a lot of meat on his bio for some reason.

Now instead of being angry, Mickey is suicidal. It's really weird. There's not a lot of real story being presented here, it just gets straight into the fight with no reason. Not necessarily bad, but not necessarily good either. Cat decapitation is also a bit weird for Mickey of all characters, but I guess someone has to die somehow. Slightly better, but not enough for me to bump the score. 6.

You have a lot that you can improve upon, mostly your characterization of characters that already exist. You twist them a little into a different personality that they actually have, and everyone does it just a little, but this is a bit too much of it if you ask me.

Richter Belmont VS Johnny Joestar is my fight.