Thread:Jesterofgames/@comment-34942931-20190201201011

Hiya! I noticed you wanted someone’s opinion on Noctus vs. Dante, and I’m also noticing Big kinda...stopped me from doing it. I would’ve commented sooner but I didn’t have a battle to really dish out for review so I’m gonna do it here so it can be a bit more personal! I’m gonna do this while in the middle of reading the fight so everything I make will be in real time. So, here we go.

Now my main problem with the analysis is the constant information being pummeled into me about the weapons. I understand that it does need to be said but it can still be a bit of an eyesore to read after so long. I found myself skimming on ocassion which isn’t exactly good. I do understand it needs to be done but I’m just saying there might be a different approach to it. Though the main thing that got me was that wall of text in Noctis’s profile. I don’t mean any offense from this, but woah that thing is huge. A bit difficult on the eyes but thankfully it’s easy to fix by just breaking it up a little at least.

Dante’s analysis is fine personally the only problem I find is a couple grammar mistakes but other than that good on ya! The pre battle is a bit confusing with the way that there’s no spacing between characters talking and it makes it a bit difficult to read but once again that’s something that can easily be fixed.

The fight itself, though, is pretty good despite a few grammatical errors. The fights with Trish, Lady and Nero felt a little more like side thoughts but they were still great, and the end of it I was actually kind of in suspense about who won, so all and all, good on you! A few grammatical issues and maybe a few confusion descriptions here and there but otherwise that’s great! I say keep it up!

So...yeah, sorry for like a long message but I had to say it 