Talk:Akame vs. Wolverine/@comment-5035900-20170109091855

I'll put all my criticisms as politely as I can...

The battle lacked excitement and energy. I couldn't get a feeling for any movement across the battlefield, attacks being dodged and countered, last stands, etc and it felt more like the two stood in place the entire time and took turns attacking until one of them died. These two engaged in a battle has much potential for intense clashes, emotion, and turmoil, and I feel you could've done so much more with what you had.

Even as a Wolverine fan, I'm quite open to the idea that his healing factor can be overcome. While lesser poisons have failed, carbonadium has slowed it, a wound from the Muramasa blade could take as long as a few days for Wolverine to heal, and the Microverse virus effectively shut down Wolverine's healing factor entirely until his death. So with that, I could accept the idea of Akame's blade shutting down his healing factor...

But it needed to be explained in much, much more detail. Would it only take on slash to cut off his healing factor entirely or would it have to take a couple? Would his healing factor be down for the count entirely or would it eventually overcome the permanent wound if given enough time?

As for Wolverine's death by decapitation, that too needed much more detail. I've only watched a little Akame ga Kill, so I wouldn't know of her cutting feats, but she'd need to cut at his adamantium spine at a molecular level just to be able to do so. Alternatively, if such a scenario occured in which his healing factor was shut down (like with the Microverse virus), a stab to the heart or such wounds would be enough to kill him.

I hope these points I've made can inspire improvement. We don't all start as great writers, but we all can work on further developing our crafts. Best wishes.