Talk:Elemental Girl Battle Royale (Awesome Betterhero)/@comment-26025032-20150219052903

If I could lend some constructive critisism here. Your info about each characters weapon, armor, and abilities are quite limited. You have too many characters fighting each other in a rather confusing battle format, and you didn't give wiz or boomstick much dioloug. Further more your reasons for each victory and defeat are vague, so If you really want to be taken seriously with the royal I would advise some serious revising and editing to make sound more plausible