User blog comment:SuperSaiyan2Link/Be Honest/@comment-24281142-20150115223503

You asked me to be honest, so I'm gonna be, but warning before you read the rest of this but I'm gonna be grading hard. But just know that I don't mean any of this to be really offensive or for this to come across as me looking down on you. Moving on...

While I can tell that you're trying your hardest with your battles, your research does seem to be lacking. Take it from someone who did an analysis blog on Silver and plans on doing a fight with him, you had some rather inaccurate stuff on him. First thing that comes to mind, he can't actually use Chaos Control.

Secondly, the analysis and conclusions you need to work a bit more on. They seem rather short and lacking in detail, which is NEVER a good thing for a Death Battle. If you're audience isn't convinced of your outcome, you're gonna get some hate for it.

But the fights are probably where I have the biggest issue. The fights are suppose to be the main event, the exciting part of all Death Battles, but your's don't feel all that long and kind of boring at times. I mean if you're gonna have characters talking in them, use more than the generic sentences of "It's no use", "O-K", "You're too slow". The misrepresentation of Silver just assuming Ness was the Iblis Trigger was also something I didn't like. Try to make them of a length that you have to scroll a bit to read the full thing rather than just a couple sentences. Maybe work on your grammar and punctuation a bit, and try to make your fight something that grabs your reader's attention and makes them want to continue reading.

Again, REEAAALLLYYY sorry if this came across as douchey in any way, but this is just how I give out criticism...