User blog:Jesterofgames/need an openion or well a few

i need an opineion on my Death battle Cell Vs Laharl. i really worked hard on it but i dont think its that good and well i would like an openion as well as some critizesm.

link to fight here http://deathbattlefanon.wikia.com/wiki/Cell_vs_laharl?venotify=created