Thread:Mallen92506/@comment-28787288-20170814205553/@comment-28787288-20170823195853

I fiddled with the first two paragraphs, and brought the word count up to 504. See what you think.

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A brilliant half moon shines down on a whitened winter plain, illuminating the pale figure of Queen Elsa. Suddenly, a large wave rolls in from the wine-dark sea. It slides back, revealing the brown-haired waterbender, Katara. The two women stare at each other, both knowing why they are there. Slowly, they shift into their fighting stances.

FIGHT!

Elsa thrusts her arms at Katara, launching a snow blast at here. Katara easily blocks the attack with water from her pouches, and launches a counterattack of her own. Else brings up a wall of ice, shielding herself from the attack, and then raises up huge ice spikes to trap Katara. When she moves in for a killing blow, Katara spins her arms, and bends the water in the ice cage. The newly formed octopus arms slam into Elsa, knocking her flying.