Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-33952388-20181231152825

All right: Zoroark VS Blackout, a battle with two characters I have NO IDEA who they are.

The analyses was just...alright, but I'll get into that later, the grammar was good and I didn't see a lot of errors. The analyses were kind of short, probably due to the vague-ness of Pokémon and Skylanders. Zoroark's backstory was one sentence long, but then again, Pokémon. Blackout's backstory was also abruptly stopped:

Eventually, he met up with Master Eon, & the two teamed up to stop the Dark Stygian once & for all. Vrokorta: Blackout has many abilities, his primary attack has him whip enemies with his elastic wings. It just...ends. Other than that, the analyses were fine.

The thumbnail was kind of small, as well as the infobox, but that's simply a nitpick. The setting for the fight was basic, but again, another nitpick.

Onto the fight: it was a bit long, but it was interesting enough to keep me hooked. Both of the combatants being Dark type it put them in an unfamiliar situation because they basically had the same power. The fight went back and forth a lot and when I thought for sure that the fight was over there was another paragraph.

But damn, that ending was brutal! While the winner was kind of obvious, but that didn't suck the fun out from the fight.

The conclusion was good, although I had one MAJOR gripe with the conclusion/analyses. Why were the actual stats in the conclusion? Most of the analyses was talking about the combatants' moves, while the actual statistics weren't revealed until the fight was over, so moving into the fight, I had no idea who was faster, stronger or more durable.

Overall, a really good fight, but the analyses and conclusion could've been better.

Analyses: 6.5/10

Fight: 9/10

Conclusion: 7/10

Overall: 7.5/10

Here's one of mine: Ice Climbers VS Baby Mario & Baby Luigi