Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-26270351-20190510184350

Alright Rai lemme take a crack at reviewing your battle.

Interlude: Alright the Interlude was good, it gave a good opening for the theme of the fight (the theme being sci fi). I also like the characters that you use rather than Wiz and Boomstick. It’s always good to see custom researchers.

Analysis: The analysis for Krystal was great, you went into great detail on her powers and her backstory especially, I loved the jokes as well such as “I’d like to evolve with her” and the “wait, don’t condors eat foxes?”

As for Jenny I liked it for the same reasons as Krystal’s. I didn’t know jack about either character before reading the analysis’s but now I know more about them. There were a few capitalization errors here and there but it didn’t distract me from the writing which is always a good thing.

The Fight: Man this fight was great! I liked the reasoning for the fight, it was really creative and made sense and it was pretty funny how Slippy was accused of kidnapping.

As for the fight it had a few grammar errors in a few places but again it wasn’t too distracting from the reading, aside from that they both utilized their weapons well and it was really action packed with them punching and kicking over and over never giving either fighter a break. I also liked how the fight went from hand-to-hand to weaponry to fighting in their ships and finally the ending with the final beam attack. (Not gonna spoil the fight) I just liked how the fight was spaced out. Pun definitely intended.

Results: The results were really explained well, and the way you compared both fighters of speed, durability, and strength was really descriptive. I always like when people show examples of both fighters feats instead of just being like “x did this so they win lol” I also loved the pun. Cat puns are always great.

Overall I’d give it a 9/10