User blog comment:GmeaThe1/Tales of a Fanon Part 1: Awakenings/@comment-27448264-20160910043619

you asked for rates and so you shall receive:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T2nF8kGiGUlXSJwiVW9H-eEgLYg4gbjeXDPUOjv5CXk/edit?usp=sharing

mostly just grammar fixes, not bad overall.