Thread:WarpyNeko930/@comment-31067519-20170118024254

I've read some of your written What-If Death Battles, and I'd appreciate if you gave me some pointers on writing. Or typing. Whichever term it is. Anyway, I just finished writing Smoker (from One Piece) vs Reaper (Overwatch). It may not be the closest matchup, but it seemed very original. I'm sorta new here (I actually had to ditch my old account here since I had a few problems with it. You might know which it is). I'd appreciate it greatly if you gave me some pointers on my writing. I want you to do it since you definitely seem to know what you're doing in your writing skills. I'd appreciate it if you gave me advice on JUST my writing. Nothing about the pics or any other stuff. I'd greatly appreciate it if you gave me pointers on ONLY my writing. That, and you're obviously free to debate about the outcome. This is a website where we can debate non-personally and non-aggressively and must be as fair as possible in deciding who would win between these characters. We can definitely FEEL biased, we just can't let it cloud our judgement here. I tried my best on this matchup, and I think I did at least decently on it for my second fight (the first fight I wrote here involved the character on my profile picture that you can plainly see on my old account).

Again, I'd greatly appreciate it if you gave me pointers on my writing on Smoker vs Reaper. Of course, if you decide not to take a look and give me pointers, I understand. You're probably busy with you're own What-If Death Battles, so I understand perfectly if you don't have time. 