Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20181206190627

(I totally accept your criticism, but I thought I made it clear why the fight started. Magolor wanted to steal the Power Stars [like Bowser did], & Rosalina wanted to stop him. Sounded good to me, but I guess everyone has a different opinion)

Well the grammar seems to be better, good to see the improvement.

While I don't understand all of Joseph's analysis (never watched Jojo), it does give a good explanation of his feats, & it meets the word requirement. Star Lord's analysis doesn't seem to go over much in comparison, but I never researched him, so I can't say for sure if there should be more. Overall, both analyses are good.

The fight was pretty good, I especially liked the dialogue for the most part. My only gripes are that it seem like there are a few too many pain exclamations, but maybe that's just me or something. The other thing was that you didn't link to any of your music cues, which I think it makes the fight more seamless when done.

The results section is good, comparing the stats & explaining who's stronger. My only problem is that you say Star Lord is City Block level without any justification.

Overall, the match-up isn't that interesting in my opinion (Neither fighter is from a series I'm all that interested in), & each aspect of the fight is just good.

6/10

Here's my latest completed battle, a collab with Brown Eevee: The Chosen Undead VS The Last Dragonborn