Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-33952388-20191117041140

Let me help revive this thread, eh?

So, Yang vs Terry, I guess I'll start off with Yang's analysis. Yang's analysis was informative and well-written. I like how when you talked about Yang's backstory, it didn't go on and on, it was short, sweet and gave people reading everything they needed to know about Yang's life.

Despite doing a fight with Yang myself, I had no idea that her Ember Cecelia could shoot fire dust and that her Aura could protect her from internal bleeding and broken bones (I wonder if that changes my Johnny Cage vs Yang fight). I liked the math you added in for Yang punching the Atlas Prototype. If you worked out the math on your own, that's awesome and I applaud you. Even if you didn't, it's a nice touch.

There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but these were few and far between (this goes for the whole page). On the other hand, you neglected to talk about Yang's whole 'weak against kicking' and 'losing an arm' thing, which brings the analyses down a bit.

Terry's analysis is good, just like Yang's. The bird skit thing at the start was funny. However, Terry's abilities were only covered in a sentence. This is fine for basic attacks, but I think you could've added a bit more to his abilities, and considering I'm someone who hasn't played Fatal Fury, it can be vague and leave something to be desired.

One minor gripe with the analyses is that there's one popup for each analysis. This may be because the analyses are relatively short, but in my opinion, if there's gonna be one popup, why add it at all? I'm not trying to seem rude, but it feels unnecessary.

Moving onto the fight, I feel like a fighting tournament isn't really a creative way to start things. If they were two boxers or karate masters, then sure, an arena is fine, but Yang isn't like that and it seems out of place for her to enter a fighting tournament in the first place.

The fight was intense, fast paced and action-packed, which I really like. I feel like Yang was a bit out of character, her normally cheerful and goofy personality kind of conflicts with the angry, screaming version in the fight.

"It was time for the final attack. This next strike would end it all." Now, THAT is a well written line. I really love it. It sets up the gravitas and drama of the situation. It's just a good line.

Also, the kill is pretty good, if not kind of basic. I mean, it is the ____, and there's not really any way that ____ could NOT use it. One minor gripe that I have with the fight render is that Terry is pixelated and Yang is not. I get that it's hard to find Yang renders since she's a 3-D animated character but it feels off to me.

The results are great and do a good job of displaying the difference in power between the winner and loser. I agree with the results and the fact that you put the stats together and compared them really let someone get an idea of how powerful one character is compared to another, which is what Death Battle is all about.

Overall, this is a well-made fight with the correct results and an intense and fun fight. Some things could be improved, as with every fight on the wiki, but it's an awesome fight and I have to say good job.

Analyses: 8/10

Fight: 8.5/10

Results: 8/10

Overall: 8/10

Now, for the next fight to be reviewed....

Mii Brawler Vs. Ryu Ta-da! (The remastered version, please. The original has already been reviewed.)