Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-27177230-20181229224505

Vrokorta wrote: @Raiando

I don't know if maybe I've just too many below average fights, but the "Description" alone I found to be really cool.

Sadly right after that, I find grammar errors. Oh well. Your writing is good, but the grammar errors break immersion.

X's analysis is good, but you said X shoots lemons. If I'm not mistaken, the lemon thing is a joke & he doesn't actually shoot lemons. You also said he blasts a bald dude, which I'm also assuming is a joke, in which case it wasn't very well executed, as we don't even know who that refers to (or at least I don't cause I'm not knowledgable on Megaman as a whole).

Emerl's analysis was better, more to the point. However, it doesn't talk much about his abilities, but that's the only flaw I could see.

The fight was very entertaining, but it would be better if it had music, like this https://youtu.be/MZsplBwRsLg. The choregraphy was great, you don't see fights like this every day.

The results were also well done, even if I'm not totally convinced to the winner.

Overall, a great fight with a few flaws. However, I sadly saw the winner coming, as (spoiler) characters always seem to beat (spoiler) characters on this wiki.

8/10

Here's another fight that I don't think gets enough attention (even though it got a positive review when I first posted it): Zoroark VS Blackout Thanks for the feedback, now in case you're wondering, i know X doesn't shoot lemons, i was simply jokin' and the "Bald Dude" is Sigma :P. Also i'll try my best to fix up the grammatical errors.

Raiando out