Thread:Arigarmy/@comment-37644871-20191215014107/@comment-7424710-20191215160035

The fight being in all bold is a little confusing at times but the entire fight is bolded so it's not like it ruins anything. Your paragraphs are all segmented and then spaced out after one or two sentences. Some grammatical mistakes (not putting a comma after the quotation marks, not spacing after ellipses when the next character is a letter, and fragmented sentences riddle the entire fight. A few spots of misspelled words.

Please describe characters instead of leaving (Author's Fault) if you plan to edit it, that's just kinda lazy. The action itself is fine, it's only in grammar and weird paragraph spacing that you mess up.

I downloaded Gammarly just so I wouldn't have tiny inconsistencies in my writing or grammar mistakes, it might help you as well.

Silver Chariot is at least FTL, that much is obvious. We aren't given much outside of what calcs people make, but that isn't always the objective answer. If you don't believe that XCano/Joshless' Silver Chariot calc isn't an outlier, it would be around that speed (I think he did 526x?). Otherwise he'd be the bare minimum of FTL like Star Platinum or any other calcs that you agree with.

I don't try to objectively analyze calcs and stuff because that's all fanwork, we just know that he's FTL in general. If you believe that he's MFTL or FTL is none of my concern, I don't have a reason to push my beliefs on stuff like that. I just believe Silver Chariot is at least FTL, what's beyond that is no clue because me and Josh haven't gotten back to recalcing Joj stuff.