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Tips for a good story:


 * First chapter has to be the best out of all of them. Include Kim's backstory, but only a tiny bit to leave people hanging. The rest of the backstory should be revealed throughout the storyline.


 * Interesting characters. No characters should be close to similar, as then the character would get bland. I suggest the brave, the flirt, the jerk, and the innocent character.


 * Not too OP. If a character just beats every villain without at least losing once, he story gets boring. Villains should be different and stronger, as well as able to defeat the main hero. The hero would defeat him later on,cor the hero might need someone else's help to succeed.

Hope that helps.