Talk:Dante/@comment-27266084-20190328224129

Okay, can you at least improve on your own edits as you may have not double checked the last edit of this page:

1. Cavaliere's origin on how it has been created repeated twice.

2. King Cerberus, "Has Three Forms;" Is it a semi-colon

3. "Forced the mouth of Echidna Open from the Inside w" <---

4. Just say "Shattered a Stone Statue with one punch" then

5. "Can swing Rebellion hard enough to Create a Large Fash in the Ceiling." Largw Fissure? Large Fracture?

6. "Saved Lucifer from an Energy Attack Before it Struck" I think you meant Lucia

7. One too many "Capable of" but fine

8. "Can utilize it too "Summon" the Rebellion to his hand"

9. "Healed having the Yamato cut-through his hand a" <---

10. He does have an ability to be deprived from food and water for a month(or part of his Superhuman Stamina, I don't know) that should at least have been included even here.

11. Sin Devil Trigger should at least have a quick statement about its enhanced speed and Majin form is already no longer his true form

12. "Enables Dante to Block Enemy Attacks and Return the"

13. "Defeated the Demon King Mundus who is capable of Creating a Universe with the Sword of Sparda" aeiou and it makes it sound like Mundus needed Sparda in order to create it.

14. "In an Alternate Timeline; Defeated a More Powerful Version of Trish" More powerful Mundus and his army of Trish

15. Lastly, Dante and Vergil sparring each other in the Underworld...as both a Feat and Fault. This sounds unneeded as if you were to read the Feats first, you'll think Dante still is the stronger brother or read the Faults first, vice versa. Just say that they're sparring each other with even scroes or something as an only Feat.

There and, if allowed, I'll create some "Respect Thread" for the sources of all of his abilities and feats you've left behind.