Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-33952388-20181219074607

First of all, I had to look up the McDonald's Darkseid thing but whatever.

Moving onto the page itself, the description was great and so were the two analyses. The analyses had great grammar, had just enough humour to keep it interesting and were VERY in-depth, it was so good! However, I felt that the quality of the page dropped pretty far.

The fight itself was great, honestly I don't think the loser shouldn't have survived as long as they did. There were a lot of grammar errors, mainly where commas should've been placed. You also had the tendency to have the words Boom! or Splink which did become distracting at times. When both Thanos and Darkseid had been stabbed, they moved like the fight was just starting, which I can understand for Darkseid, but not Thanos.

The conclusion was great and did a good job saying who won and why. The conclusion was not long enough to become tedious but long enough to get your point across. Overall, the fight could've benefited from a check-up, but the rest was great.

Analyses: 10/10

Fight: 7/10

Conclusion: 9/10