Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-27150398-20190109183810

Deimos Vs The Scout

Firstly, the Description and Interlude sections didn’t have Headers so that didn’t make them look particularly organised. I also feel that said sections were pretty brief and that they could have been done in more detail in order to explain what the two characters have in common.

In terms of the analysis sections, it would have been better if you described the character’s backstories in more detail rather than just summarising them in a couple of lines, however other than that I think you did a decent job at describing Deimos’s and Scout’s abilities overall.

While the battle was pretty short, it was quite intense and action packed and the dialogue between the two was quite funny.

In terms of the Results, they were fairly brief and I feel that you could have gone into more detail about why Scout ended up winning the battle.

Additionally, the spelling and grammar throughout the page wasn’t that great and while I know how it feels to struggle with spelling words correctly and to use grammar in the correct manner, it would be have good if you put in a bit more effort to try and fix the spelling and grammar mistakes on your page. Lastly, I’d recommend writing Boomstick’s lines in bold text in the future to help ensure that his dialogue stands out from Wiz’s and to also help make the page look more presentable overall.

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