Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-27150398-20181219070129

Alrighty, it’s time for me to properly use this thread myself.

'''Mii Brawler Vs. Ryu ''' Firstly, in terms of the Description, I personally feel that it would have been a good idea to state which companies/franchises the two combatants come from in case any of your readers don’t where they come from (e.g. Nintendo VS Capcom! Two fistfighters brawl it out for supremacy.)

The Interlude section seems fine to me.

In terms of the analysis sections, you didn’t include any quotes or quote any actions of the characters at the end of either analysis section so I’d recommend doing that in the future. You also didn’t include anything about Ryu’s backstory. While his backstory is fairly well-known, I think it would have been better if you included at least 2 or 3 lines on his backstory instead of just moving straight onto his moveset.

While the battle itself was fairly short, it was pretty intense and I think you did a pretty good job on it, however it would have been better if you included some dialogue in the battle for Ryu to make it more interesting.

The Results section seems fine to me as well.

Overall, for a first battle I think you did a pretty good job.

My version of Darkseid vs. Thanos. Keep in mind though that this battle is 5,885 words so it may take a bit of time for anyone to read.