Thread:ANormalGuest666/@comment-30408599-20190726002051/@comment-30408599-20190726223148

While you did lengthen the mentioned sections to the required length, your analyses & results still fall short.

Guest 666's analysis still ends with "watch Pt 2 to uncover the rest". Analyses CANNOT end this way. Ending an analysis like this shows that you were wither lazy, or didn't do enough research. If there's more to be said in your analysis, than say it, don't tell people to watch it themselves.

Both your analyses barely talk about the character you're analyzing. Instead, you talk about the stories they appeared in. If your gonna talk about a certain character, then talk about the character, not the series they came from. For example, in Guest666's analysis, you talk about how Emily was bullied & blamed for Veronica's death, but that has almost nothing to do with Guest666, so you shouldn't spend so much time talking about it. Same goes for Tails' analysis, you don't need to bring up Orbot & Cubot, you don't need to talk about how Sonic beat Eggman's robots, you don't need to talk about Eggman getting stuck in a void, & you don't need to talk about Eggman's diaogue at the end of Sonic Lost World. Instead of filling your analyses with information on the series, you should mention things like the character's feats, abilities, & faults. Just look at a few other Death Battles, you'll see everyone doing it.

Lastly, there's still info in the Results that you never bring up in the analyses. You say that Guest666 can Time Travel/send things through time, but you never bring it up in his analysis. Same goes for making people commit suicide, & having "ultimate powers".

So yes, you have until August 9th 2019 to fix this. Just remember that you can ask for help if you need it.