Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-33952388-20200130074302

Well, I'm don't know much about DIO or Diavolo, so this'll be interesting to read.

Starting out with DIO, his bio was alright, it's a little shorter than I would prefer, but that's just my personal preference. You did a good job explaining how his abilities worked as well as his backstory and weaknesses. Small little grammatical errors, 'time stop's' shouldn't have an apostrophe and 'Tough, Badass, Bastard' doesn't need to all have capital letters, just tiny things.

And now Diavolo. Now, this may be due to DIO not having as many powers or abilities as Diavolo, but DIO's bio seems much shorter than Diavolo's. I think it's better when both characters have equally long bios or at least similar length bios, unless they don't have many powers (Such as the Animatronics), but this whole thing may be due to my ignorance. Anyway, a small thing: Mercer: Okay. Buckle up guys. Necro: Diavolo's times skip works like this. I think that might of just been a mistake.

These bios were very good, Diavolo's was very informative as well as interesting, which is a good thing in terms of Death Battles. However, I feel like these bios could have been funnier. One of the ways to keep a reader engaged is to keep them entertained with jokes, which unfortunately, your bios lack. I feel like a bio has to be interesting as well as entertaining. The bios were good, but I feel like they could've been...more. Not saying they were bad, far from it, actually. It's just that I feel like they have more potential.

Now onto the fight and DAMN, that was a good start. I really liked it, like with the bios, there were little spelling and grammatical mistakes, but it doesn't really distract all that much.

I liked the fight, especially the part where DIO is causally commanding a boy to give him his severed arm, and then DIO killed the boy, which suddenly changed the mood, not saying it was bad, and certainly fitting for a death battle. And dang, what a brutal ending! I'm a sucker for brutal deaths, as long as they are not too over-the-top.

In my opinion, it could've been more descriptive, as that's my personal preference (something that I, admittedly, am also working on). Just one minor thing: "WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!" that doesn't seem that necessary to add, just saying "WRRRYYY!!" Is just as effective, while just describing what the sound is, not taking up a full paragraph with just a sound.

The banter between characters was good, if not leaning towards the 'too much swearing' category for me. That's just my personal preference, though, and I have no idea how these characters act in canon.

And for the results, I'll say one thing and say that most of the results were okay, they weren't the best, nor were they too in-depth, just a comparison of their best feats, and what kind of irks me is that you didn't really use any of the numbers or math that was displayed in the bios, which is a shame, because with the numbers, it can give a proper comparison between the two instead of comparing them to other characters. People that aren't too familiar with the characters won't understand.

Overall, it was a good battle, a few bumps here and there, but it was fun and interesting for me, which is all I really need in a Death Battle.

Analyses: 7.5/10

Fight: 8/10

Results: 7.5/10

Overall: 7.5/10

Now, time for my newest (and one of my best) fights: Akihiro Dragoscale vs Lloyd Raines