Talk:Palutena vs. Madoka Kaname/@comment-5035900-20141118235036

Two suggestions:

1. I know it's not easy writing the character analysis (even harder to do Wiz and Boomstick), but it would be to your benefit to sum up their origins quickly, then move on to their movesets and abilities.

2. No issue with the outcome, but I'd say drop Palutena's underestimation and "hitting the gem instead of destroying it". It would be better to have Palutena not holding her punches throughout.