Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-3463132-20180724031450

LakuitaBro01.2 wrote: What about these?

https://deathbattlefanon.wikia.com/wiki/Qrow_Branwen_VS_Gordeau I will admit to disappointing myself as I thought Gordeau was someone else- but that's no fault of yours (Hollow Night vs Hollow Knight).

I enjoyed the synopsis of the characters, though I wish Gordeau had more to go on but I accept not all characters have tons of information available to them. Qrow's more fleshed out obviously and it shows in the synopsis.

The battle itself does a good job of catching what I would call the "Drunken" style of a fight where they're both trying to grab the glass- it reminds me of Jackie Chan movies and even better- reminds me of RWBY. That seems just the sort of detail they'd try to carry in a fight.

"You do need to go back in and fix your spoken areas though."

"You need to make a new paragraph when someone else speaks- not leave them on the same line. It's very confusing you see."

That might be the wiki acting up though, happens to me all the time.

Quite an enjoyable read.