Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20181114182327

SSS13 - The connections are interesting, & the research was pretty good. I liked the inclusion of actual numbers for the feats accomplished, most battles I read don't do that. One flaw in your Carnage analysis though, you added Spideman & Venom's strength togther to find Carnage's strength, but you also added Carnage's strength to find Carnage's strength. I don't think I need to explain why that's wrong. There are some minor grammar errors in the fight, but nothing major. The fight was pretty good, but the writing could be improved so everything flows together better, it'd make the fight more enjoyable in my opinion. I agree with the outcome, which was explained well. The last few fights I've read didn't do so wel in this respect, so it's nice to see the job done right.

Overall, this was a good fight. Keep up the good work, & consider improving the grammar & writing. Just my two cents.

Weedle vs Kunemon

This time I'm asking for feedback on the rematch, but if you want to review the original fight, feel free.