Thread:Razon16/@comment-7424710-20170405214816

yo

If you want your page, Planetside 2 vs halo, to stay up, you need a few things:

1. Proper grammar. There's many misspellings across the entire page, and we can't just have gibberish all over the place.

2. You need headings to separate each section of the bios, of which you heavily need to revamp. They're so short, you need to go further in-depth.

3. Your fight is too short, it needs to be a minimum of 500 words to stay up.

I'll give you a little bit of time to rework your page, but if you take more than 24 hours, it will be deleted entirely. I suggest you work on your grammar and organization first. 