Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-33952388-20190810110400

Been a while since I've been on this thread!

Starting off, weird match-up, but I can understand the connections and stuff. I'd also personally make the tn bigger, but that's just me.

My first problem with the fight is that Wiz's dialogue is in bold (If this is because of an eyesight problem or anything like that, ignore this next point). It's, for me, hard to follow along while reading if both host's are in bold.

Kratos' analyses was overall, pretty good. There were grammar errors throughout the analysis, like there not being a space after a comma, but it didn't subtracts from the page. You did a pretty good job of explaining Kratos' weapons, armours and skills, as well as his weaknesses. I'd recommend putting one of the combatant's quotes under the analyses, but that's only a minor nitpick.

Metal Sonic's bio wasn't as good as Kratos'. Sometimes, having short bio's are fine, like if a character doesn't have that many feats, weapons, such as an Ace the Bat-Hound bio, for example. You still did a good job explaining MS's weapons and different forms. However, when explaining Metal Madness, it was just a big chunk of text. I'd split this up between the two hosts.

The fight itself was excellent. I was a bit confused by the big gaps between dialogue, which was weird. I thought maybe there were images that hadn't loaded in, but no. I'd put dialogue in italics if you were worried about it blending in.

There were a few grammar errors, but they were nothing major. Like I said before, the fight is easily the best part of the page. It's just so...detailed. It's just excellently written. It was action-packed and fun to read.

I agree with the conclusion and the reasoning was accurate. Similar grammar errors to the analyses. However, I'd give evidence for your statements rather than stating something and leaving it be. Just as an example, you said Kratos was smarter than Metal Sonic, and then moved on. There was no evidence of Kratos being smarter than Metal Sonic.

Also, I'd say there's no need for a 'Trivia' section, since it has one point, and it's about Kirby vs Pennywise.

Analyses: 7/10

Fight: 9/10

Conclusion: 6.5/10

Overall: 7/10

Here's two of my battles: Lightning McQueen vs Sweet Tooth

Ben 10 vs Maxwell