Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20181006042316

@MadMaxPyro - Thanks. I made an effort to portray each character accurately cause it's more fun that way. I also wanted to make sure the fight had a good reason for occuring, I've been criticized for that once before. I honestly don't remember why I decided to have a series of 1v1s, I think it was just easier to write. I plan to make my Winner Battle Royale more "all out". It's funny that you say it inspired you, cause I was inspired by Jacky's Loser Battle Royale.

But enough of that, your fights now.

I already read Dark Bowser VS Shadow Dedede, but I'll say my thoughts on it. It was a good fight, pretty nice back & forth between the fighters, and the fight appeared even all throughout the battle, which is good to maintain suspense and not give away the winner. The research was also really good, and the results explained things pretty well. Overall, a pretty good fight.

As for Tracer vs Ruby, you may want to try repositioning some of the images at the top of the page so there isn't so much space between Ruby's intro & Tracer's intro. Also, the background information goes into a bit too much detail, I don't think outlining family & team members is necessary. There are some minor grammar errors, but nothing major. I liked your choice of music for the analyses. As for the fight itself, it was awesome. The choreography was really good, and the music really sets the tone. Definitely a good read and a great fight overall.

My fight:

Weedle vs Kunemon

I'm surprised I never posted this sooner.