Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-25421952-20190514200243

The death battle itself is very good.

The bio of Specter Knight it's actually very organized and clever in terms on weaponry and abilities, each one with a lot of detail. However, Qrow is too short which is a little disappointed considering the series he is from.

The battle is very good and it’s as good from start to finish and a good demostration of both fighters. However, I had two major issues, the first one it’s the hard way to difference which fighter said what quote. In the prebattle is very notable, but as an exampñe, the small quote "Looks Like my Aura saved my ass again" you could use the paragraph before words like Qrow said or exclaim. The second one is the big problem of the fight and is the bold, it’s blurry to read some moments of the fight and it affects the bio and results due the conversation between both Mercer and Necro. This is what I would do.

Mercer: Specter Knight is capable of running up walls and dodgeing the return stroke of lightning, which as metioned in Qrow's analyisis, moves at two hundred million miles per hour.

'''Necro: However Specter Knight's weaknesses are pretty devestating. His dark power is limited, and if he uses all of it he can't use any Curios. And he is somewhat a glass cannon, having very little in the way of defense. But overall Specter Knight is one of the most powerful knights under the Enchantresses control.'''

The analysis is accurate, but it was also an easy one to guess. The explanation is very good, so it gets a pass. Overall is a good battle, but the cons can be improved, and the lecture could be more fluency. 7/10

So it's time to Ephraim vs Alm