Thread:TJman461/@comment-32674897-20171113013656/@comment-26270351-20171113014823

Alright I think the fight was ok but if you saw my comment where I said to use capitalization. It would look a lot better. Like I said the fight was good but if you worked on your grammar and capitalization it would improve it a lot. If you look at fights like Thor vs Wonder Woman (which was written by BigtheCat10) you could use that to give you a basic idea of how to write with more capitalization/spacing.

Sorry for the long answer. I’m not trying to make your work look bad I’m just trying to give you pointers.