Thread:Hagane no Saiyajin/@comment-27150398-20181221112252

Hey Hagane, since you wanted me to help you clean up these two pages I am going to give you some advice on how you can do so now.

After looking at your Gon and Killua vs Yang and Ruby page, I can see that you have copied the analysis sections for each character straight from the battles of other users of this site without asking permission from the authors of said character’s analysis sections which is against Rule 14 of this wiki’s Rules and Guidelines. However, there are two ways of solving this issue. The first way is that you either remove said character bios from your battle and write brand-new ones yourself, or I could give you links to the message walls of the authors of said character analysis sections so that you can ask for permission to use said bios in your battle. It’s your decision what option you pick.

Also, I’d highly recommend adding an Interlude section to your battle as well as some more categories to make it more presentable.

In terms of your Magnus page, I personally think it looks pretty good so far, though it would be a good idea to add a ‘Weaknesses’ section for said character (so any readers of the page will know what the character’s faults are) as well as some more categories.

I hope this helps you out.

Kind Regards

Big 