Thread:Panzysoldat/@comment-37644871-20191117011344/@comment-31617896-20191119203154

I read the whole thing. Nice battle. I do have a little bit of critique as I did notice some things.

Intro.

-Focusing is spelled wrong.

-The n in Native isn't capitalized.

Wendigo

-Wendigos are easily create dust devils.

-a dust devil at its fastest

-run a at

-When the move

-make very little logical

-Posses

-They do in fact a few weaknesses

-Wendigo is used too much to start a sentence.

Werewolf

-This mean

-toxic the Werewolves

Battle

-on the wind

-his own slash

-leapt onto the Wendigo

-and shook his head, ripping

-My sense are just better than yours

-Avale

Verdict

-Speed was and

-at least in the movement department at least.

-ment