User blog comment:Fireballsyum/I am help to writer!/@comment-32220816-20190926171251/@comment-28510457-20190930163312

Haven't read Max's yet, but the Chrom one was INCREDIBLE! You put the story together in a way that I aspire to. You captured both characters perfectly, and your results were darn near perfect! I did find some spelling errors, but I fixed those.