Talk:Savyna vs Azula/@comment-25182985-20150720210959/@comment-26558142-20150721143122

Hi and thanks for reading my death battle. Can I ask for your opinion on this fight? Because I'm a new writer, so I want to improve my writing. Maybe the things you like or hate in the battle, are the characters so far not totally ooc, are the points I brought in the result ok?