Talk:Luna VS Cresselia/@comment-27983944-20160529200839

Well that escalated really quickly. I liked it though. Might I offer you a suggestion.

1. Try to make a better conclusion. For the post fight you want to answer any questions the reader may have but also wrap it up. For instance search on YouTube Guts vs. Nightmare.

Besides a few grammar mistakes that I saw not bad for a first death battle. Also if you need some help, don't be afraid to leave a message on my message wall