User blog:BMHKain/Preview for YET another OC: Viper Reijiko

Note: Mary Sue Analysis will be done right away.

Paragraph: Viper Reijiko, formerly Kei Kuroyami was part of a rural-class civilization, until the 20th threatened to destroy the town in exchange for a more hopeful civilization. Believing that the 20th are lying, he piloted the Emergency mech: E5150; the last of its kind. While the 20th eventually evacuated, Kuroyami was given unanimous hate by his people as they blamed him for the destruction of his town, and was ultimately exiled to an Area where he was thought to be dead.

They were wrong.

Kei, rechristened as Viper Reijiko, was at peace with the snakes, and the snakes treated him as a peaceful god that likes nature. That was when he was 11 years old.

At age 14 (So far, the youngest but most peaceful being of the Freedom Fighter Branch of the U.N.), He narrowly avoided failure of his tests. He only passed due to his weapon, Nagatana, a much shorter than normal Katana that can be drawn quicker than even Kim Yun Tsun's Undeceased Nihilism. as the only weapon Viper uses, Nagatana draws as fast as a snake bite, with a serum that can poison anything. Organic, Mechanical, even turning stone to ash. His strategy is to draw out the fight thanks to his "venom" in an opponents most needed spots, and render them useless. When the 4'7" Snake-Being believes his opponent has enough, he simply slashes them in two with a true sword slash, killing them on the spot.

Nagatana is only 2'1" long. Its blade is 1'7" long.

Sorry for the long paragraph, I'll test him in a One Blogged Melee soon enough. You probably desire to know what he looks like. Here's an outline for now. I'll color him in after he get's the nod by enough officials...