Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-30408599-20190628223725

I already read & reviewed Mega Man VS Ryu, & it was good. So, I'll just focus on Sans VS Ness. Fair warning, I'm in a pretty critique mood right now.

The connections are pretty good, not that I'm particularly interested in connections, but I felt like mentioning it. Your first Description is good, but you could use a comma after "psychics" to pace the sentence better & make it easier to read (Minor gripe I know, but it stood out to me. This won't play a part in the final rating though, unless I find more). Your second description was funny the way it made a jab at the Sans=Ness theory. As for the Interlude, it's pretty normal, so moving on to Sana' analysis.

For starters, while the first jab at Sans=Ness was funny, I feel the second mention to it was unnecessary. I like how Sans shows up during the analysis in regular 4th wall awareness fashion for Boomstick to complain about. When you're talking about Sans' speed, I find it unnecessary to mention the speed of a knife swing right before mentioning the speed of lightning. The first feat is obsolete compared to the second, and might as well not be there in the first place. I love the part where you actually show up in the analysis to say you don't want to make Ness vs Frisk. Overall, Sans' analysis was pretty good.

Moving on to Ness' analysis, I like the joke for Poo, I didn't see that coming. As for the DBZA reference, I don't get it cause I didn't watch it (oh well). You went over Ness' abilities pretty well, & I like the Boomstick joke that follows, wasn't expecting that either. You wrapped things up nicely with the feats & faults, and I have nothing left to say.

Moving on to the Fight, the setup is nice, & I like how Sans is just randomly reading Astro Boy at the beginning. It's also cool how this being an alternate universe scenario, you work it into the original story, but it simply goes down a different path. The fight itself is pretty action packed, and I like how Sans uses his edgy dialogue since he's trying to avenge Papyrus, meanwhile Ness takes a few opportunities to reason with Sans. I agree with the outcome, though I think the KO was a bit much considering who won. Seems a bit out of character that they'd go that far when victory had already been achieved.

You Post-Analysis was well written & informative, which is all I really need.

Overall: Great, 9/10

My most recent completed battle: Blast (Epic Boss Fighter) vs Godzilla