Talk:Spider-Man VS Kirito/@comment-27822848-20160120203653

Alright, I have to be honest. While I agree with the results, the conclusion is really, really shoddy.

"This wasn't a close match. Kirito had more weapons than Spiderman, but Spiderman literally took the cake with everything else."

You never really took the time to explain this. If you were going to, you could mention how Spider-Man can have buildings fall on him and emerge almost completely unharmed, and how Kirito has been harmed by much lesser things.

You also stated that most of Kirito's feats were with help, and while that's true, he's accomplished several things on his own too. He defeated the supposedly really difficult Santa boss by himself, and with little effort. You also stated that Kirito has no feats of strength, even though he can regularly punch through steel and overpower physically stronger opponents, like SkullReaper.

While I have no problem with the winner, it's a really hastily-drawn conclusion. Shrek, if you want to improve your battle writing, you need to start putting some more effort into the fights, into the conclusions. You're definitely improving, but you need to give yourself that room to improve. -Para