Thread:SuperSaiyan2Link/@comment-5035900-20190225232627

I don't really have the time to come onto Discord as much these days, so, if you have any free time, could you give your feedback on what I have for [https://dragonballfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Attack_of_the_Saiyans_Saga_(Pan%27s_Ascent) Ch. 14] so far? What's good, what's not, what's in-character, what breaks character, suggestions, etc. 