Thread:Jared1111/@comment-26424118-20160725184528/@comment-26424118-20160725190524

Jared1111 wrote: Dude... i'll be honest with you. You need to stop making the OC Battles, i understand you like your characters and all, but you need to understand that it looks really, REALLY, stupid to be putting your own characters against real characters.

Maybe you're just young, and maybe i came across as cruel, but the truth is is that your content when it comes to your own personal characters is laughable, and i get that you may not want to hear that, but its better that someone tells you like it is. No bullshit.

Your writing is, in all honesty, cringeworthy, even by MLP standards. Especially with the fight against Superman, the fact you kept hyping up your own character as the hero, and then triumphantly "crossing it's hooves" while she kills the shit out of superman was the biggest wankfest i've ever seen... and its for your OWN CHARACTER. The fact you talk about your character like it has actual weight it also hilarious, its fan ficiton BS that you are trying to use against real characters, and its hilarious.

It's time to stop, please. Just do normal battles, and try to learn from other people's structure with Death Battle, so you dont over inflate the importance of your own character. That's not the point here. I'll admit, I am not good at making fights, but could you not be offensive about it? Calling others fights garbage when its not even finished. All your comments had no constructive criticism whatsoever And for the record. I DO DO NORMAL BATTLES! Look at Demyx vs Eddie Riggs is one example, and I can list dozens of examples of fights where I do not use an oc. The point is, can you please at least be constructive with the comments?