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Not a Mario or Zelda expert, so I can't speak on accuracy in regards to their power or the characters' personalities and lines, but from a completely neutral standpoint, your analysis was brief, but informative, and the battle kept building up as it went on. Especially once the fire in the cave started, the action and consequences became especially intense. The death of (SPOILERS) was especially gruesome, yet strangely fitting regarding (SPOILERS) gameplay.

The only tiny criticism I have is in regards to the size of your paragraphs. I'd recommend breaking up some of the larger paragraphs into smaller ones to let things breath a bit, but it's a minor thing.

But yeah, as a guy who knows jack about either series, I definitely learned about their arsenals and abilities, the battle definitely did its job and then some, and the outcome was fairly reasonable.

Hope this isn't an issue, but instead of my most recent battle, I have a preview of my upcoming battle: basically part of the pre-fight and the start of the battle. It's still a work in progress, so I want to see what I can do to improve the final product.

https://deathbattlefanon.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Nkstjoa/Nkstjoa_Series_Finale_Fight_Preview