Board Thread:Wiki Management/@comment-27150398-20180211135035/@comment-27177230-20190203033503

Alright Big, so time for me to review about Superman & Goku VS Mario & Sonic.

The Bios: I honestly think that they were quite all over the place, like how the lines are placed and that I think Kenneth should use the Capital Letters and Comma Marks on right places, anyhow the bios itself were quite bland as they were kinda short and don't go that deep into detail as It should talk about more of the back story, then talk about their Speed, Strength, Durability, and then talk about Feats and Faults. Overall I think Kenneth should make them more detailed and have the lines spaced correctly.

The Battle: Now for the battle I think the choreography of the fight is fine, I like how Goku and Supes have a sparing match at the beginning, however the writing is still the issue as the lines are still spaced in weird ways like when someone speaks and they do something without the character's sentence being in quotation marks, also there were some several grammatical issues that shall be fixed.

The Results: I'm unsure about the results of the fight, however it's quite short and barely goes into detail explaining about the victor, like it's only in several sentences, to make it long, I think Kenneth should talk about how would they be compared in Strength, Speed, Durability, Intelligence and Stamina, one by one.

Overall the fight gets a 6/10